I thoght this was really well done and nutshelled. Also, Alex came across good on camera...natural and relaxed.

I really like the concept, but consider improving your image.. the logo could use a lot of work for one thing, and the site feels a little too playful and not very professional. I know it isn't supposed to be too 'professional' considering your audience, but making it look like someone older than 5 did it would help in terms of legitimacy. also... loudclick?

Pertaining to the Elevator Pitch, I like that it is easy to understand what LoundClick is and what it does however, I agree with JM that there is too much ambient noise and not enough excitement and conviction in the voice.

Redo the video and look at us. I have to agree with SK & JM. GREAT TOOL!

Alex don't listen to all of the people that give negative critique. They offer no solutions. It is easy to tear someone down if you are as unoriginal as them.

I thought Alex looked great on this video; professional and perfect looking for this field. If the product is as impressive as Alex, I'm buying.

I would say a big "ditto" to JM - good start just a little more excitement!

All the comments are good. Look at the camera not at the midget down there. And some kind of "picture" or graphic would be nice - 60 seconds of text isn't much. Why is this better than whatever?

Great Idea, and I think script was good too, I think there are many personal website builders, but building a website with friends or colleagues is Definitely on. Video well come on guys, what did you expect it to be in 38 sec?

Interesting, well-executed product. I, for one, also liked the video. The background is reminiscent of a business opportunity infomercial, but the company president comes across as someone who genuinely believes that the merits of his product, rather than self-manufactured hype, will generate excitement. A good summary. Well done.

It's really a nice concept, we need that in France ;-)

Great idea for the rest of us non- computer geeks. I'm definitely going to give it a try.

Alex is relaxed and approachable in this clip - exactly what you want your website to be for the novice user. The persona should match the target audience and I don't think you're looking to attract the experienced web builder. The front page image is refreshing - the background "noise" in the clip is the right idea - you can fine tune that if you ever rework it but I'd stay with the relaxed approach in image, background noise and setting. I'm convinced you're on the right path with this overall approach - never lose site of your audience!! Bravo!

Good pitch, technically. However, if I were an investor for Internet company, I would like you to have these questions answered: 1. Competing products from Microsoft Live space, which allows you to do pretty much the same thing. 2. Google Apps, free service with Google cloud computing power behind. 3. Wordpress, even though, it looks to be something unrelated, it is actually a competing product. I can get wordpress as my main CMS platform without paying and more, it does have a lot of plug-ins and etc. :)

Sounds like a cool idea to me, personal website builders are common, but creating and managing the websites with your friends and colleagues is definitely on.

Great presentation and service.

The new look loudclick that just came out today is a nice upgrade - easier to navigate and neat templates to pick from for one's website.

What makes this any different than day blogger, or wordpress? IMO this is much ado about nothing. Reinventing the wheel doesn't necessarily make you a genius. I've tried using this product, and it is clumsy and has very few customization options as far as the look of your website goes.

Sara, Can you share the urls? I would love to look at what you have done.

just checked out the site...not very easy on the eyes...it's downright ugly actually - green font? come on guys...you are selling a service/site to make web sites and you don't have a prof'l looking site? baffling in my opinion