learnpipe
- Pitch Posted: January 18, 2009
- Rating: 1.41
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Comments
Tony P
2/3/09 3:15PM
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Too much detail about the product and its interface and not enough information about the market need. I finished watching without a clue why or when I should use learnpipe vs google.
Veronica P
2/3/09 7:27PM
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1. Cut about 30 seconds off the speach and get right to what are the benefits of using Learnpipe.
List them, 1, 2, 3.
Veronica P
2/3/09 7:27PM
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1. Cut about 30 seconds off the speach and get right to what are the benefits of using Learnpipe.
List them, 1, 2, 3.
Veronica P
2/3/09 7:28PM
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1. Cut about 30 seconds off the speach and get right to what are the benefits of using Learnpipe.
List them, 1, 2, 3.
Veronica P
2/3/09 7:28PM
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1. Cut about 30 seconds off the speach and get right to what are the benefits of using Learnpipe.
List them, 1, 2, 3.
Roos
2/4/09 9:36AM
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bad video/sound quality, too much distance, and more Whats in it for me/customer?
Good luck!
Roos
2/4/09 9:36AM
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bad video/sound quality, too much distance, and more Whats in it for me/customer?
Good luck!
John Dineen
2/4/09 3:47PM
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Thanks for your comments guys. I think a re-shoot is needed!
Kiessé
2/5/09 2:21AM
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Hi John,
Your video gives a very good description of the product and its features. At the end of the video I know what your product is but I don't know why I should use it vs another search engine or how this can benefit me.
On a more technical aspect, the video has poor quality, the sound is poor and it is a little bit doo dark. I suggest you present your product standing up rather than sitting down and avoid shooting that laptop as it gives the impression that you're holding to a safety net as if you don't know your product thoroughly :)
This being said, Good luck!
Cheers,
Kiessé
icbkr
4/14/09 4:39PM
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meh. While I see the advantages, I don't feel the pressing need. Maybe once in my life I was floundering about where to go for training. If there was a bunch of independent courses out there, taught by consultants one on one or something, I could see the need for the help. Frankly, in my field, you're either an idiot or you know where to go for training. I would imagine most fields are like that, so I can see the main part of your audience being made up of n00bs to the field. Could work. And the quality. Just change the room so you get rid of the echo, maybe use a lapel mike instead, and fix the lighting. All in all, excellent throw.